randoshiart's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ink and Paper]

Fun little game! I enjoyed it.

Level 10 was fun! I liked the bait and switch.

On levels 8 and 15, there are some parkour parts that are left up to chance unless you go into full screen. I didn't realize I could full screen until after I'd already beaten the game though, so that could just be a me problem.

Otherwise, I enjoyed it! Simple, but good.

No spoilers, but the last level was cool too :)

[Peerless Heart]

An interesting experience. I liked the aesthetic, and the dialogue was captivating (though I can't say that I fully understood it all.)

Two bugs that I found:

Shift doesn't seem to do anything for me, so I couldn't sprint. I'm not sure why that is.

If you hold space on any of the interactables, the text tweaks out.

Overall, a neat little experience :)

edit 1 (reply):

The shifting thing makes much more sense now. The movement is a little slow, but not unbearably so. It didn't ruin the game for me or anything, but I could see someone getting a little annoyed with it.

Otherwise, it's all good! I'd love to see what you make next!

(Just loaded the game up again. The movement speed is much better like this.)

edit 2 (reply):

Just subscribed! Can't wait to see what else you have in store.

p0tterindy responds:

thanks for the feedback :)
good to know about holding space, i can patch that.
shift is just supposed to make you turn faster. I am curious, did you find the movement unnecessarily slow? I am thinking about boosting it but I don't want to rush an already short experience.
overall this thing is a bit messy, dialogue included, but glad to see you mostly enjoyed. thanks again
patched:
I boosted the movement by 25%
fixed the holding space rushes thru dialogue

edit 1 (reply 1):
thanks so much for the feedback. glad to hear movespeed is better, i found first iteration a little frustrating. I have another game ill finish next week ish, pls check out my youtube https://www.youtube.com/@harpernicholson1 i will have more stuff there soon but ive just been working on small games for the last month or two, and finishing those up finally :)